Sunday, 3 August 2014

Love-First Try At Poetry

Hey! I finally found something to share with yah all:) I thought I would share my very first ever piece of poetry! It's a Acrostic poem, I think.

Here it is:

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Little do we know what we have till it's gone
Out of everything, this is most true with love
Very often, we don't realise what we have
Everything about this is so very sad.
 
Is it any good? I really would love some feedback:)

-Kamri

4 comments:

  1. Abigail Lennah4 August 2014 at 14:15

    I think, for your first try at poetry, you did amazingly well! I am horrible at writing poetry; if I had to write poetry, I write it jazz style-- meaning I write random words spontaneously and somehow, in the end, they all fit together.

    xoxo Morning
    http://theworldthroughmywindowsill.blogspot.com

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    1. Abigail Lennah4 August 2014 at 20:49

      By the way, I nominated you for the Beautiful Blog Award! You can view it here (and if you don't want to do it, that's okay): http://theworldthroughmywindowsill.blogspot.com/2014/08/the-beautiful-blog-award.html

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    2. Kamri4 August 2014 at 23:44

      Thanks! I bet your poetry would be awesome:)
      Thank you. I will do that right now!

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  2. Erin Estella4 August 2014 at 14:17

    Rocking words!

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